lanky21's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Tragedies of toyland]

Nice

I liked the gamey feel it has. Makes me think of some messed up toy level on a NES/SNES game. Great work, keep on rockin'!

b4ssfr34k responds:

Thanks man, this is actually old stuff, but I'm hoping to put some more out this year

[Alturos - How I Love You]

Nice

Like you said, simple. I liked the easy flow and that guitar is a little catchy. I can't help feeling like it could use a little something more though. I was really hoping for some lyrics on a couple of parts, the music was set up perfect for them. Maybe a few little touches in the first minute to grab the attention before the change at around 1:30 might help. Still, an overall good song!

5/5 and 8/10. Review me back! (if you feel so inclined) XP

Alturos responds:

Appreciate the review.

I feel the same about it being able to use just a little something more, but I'm at a loss for what. As for lyrics, I'd add them if I knew how to write them, but it's definitely not a strong point for me.

[[OS] One Perfect Hour]

Uplifting

Perfect pick me up song. 5 and DL from me, keep on rockin' my man.

ObsidianSnow responds:

Thanks for the review, bud. :)

[Inner]

Good

I liked the strange warpy atmosphere this creates. Makes me think of inverted stairways and doors with big ol' questions marks stamped on them.

Robulus responds:

Thanks so much!
Heh, I came across this when I was searching through Sounds on FLStudio and then when I found this sound I thought of the perfect sci fi tune!

[Darkest Childhood Dream]

Awesome!

Good creepiness! One thing (just in my opinion, of course) that would've amped up the whole track: if that amazing bell/chime sound slowly picked up tempo, like it was spiraling further and further out of control would've been sweet. As is, for its length it gets kind of boring the last 25 seconds or so. I say increase the length! This is a great intro to a longer darker track of horror. Still, 5/5 my dear Nadyanilo!

nadyanilo responds:

Thats a very good idea! Man, if only I could figure out how to do that. i cant seem to increase the tempo in only part of the song, although Ive tried.

Perhaps if I google it....

Thanks again!

[Sinner Man (Ambient Mix)]

Liked it

Love "Sinner Man" and like your ambient tomfoolery with the song! Good job!

PyroMaelstrom responds:

Thank you very much! It was fun to work with the piece...glad you liked it! Thanks for listening!

[Stars Like Shards]

Loved It

Had a very epic feel to it. Everything mixed expertly. Great stuff, keep sending more good stuff my man! Keep on rockin'!

Hikigane responds:

Thank you! I agree that this is one of my more epic songs. I'll definitely keep working to make more songs!

[Melting Televisions]

Liked it

Very smooth and mellow, with a retro-sounding/8bit spin. Great work, keep on rockin'!

kingtaco16 responds:

thanks dude

[[OS] Deadly Enigmas]

Awesome

I didn't even know there WAS a Maniacal Super-Villain class. I bet you aced "standing around broodingly to intense soundtracks" with this song! Good job!

ObsidianSnow responds:

Yes, yes I did indeed ace the standing around broodingly.

lol thanks, lanky.

[[The Gift]]

Good

Great arrangement, sounds good on a loop too. I felt like the tempo could've been a bit slower, try it out and see if you agree. Also, I know you said no symphony but some cello or soft violin undertones would've been sweet. Finally, you might want to look into the compression of your piano recording.. it sounded a bit raw/fuzzy, though that might simply be a problem on my end so no lost points there.

All in all, pretty good. Hope your special someone enjoyed it!

Ghaijin responds:

Aww :) Thank you for your review, and I'll certainly take those ideas into consideration, I'll see if I can redo this song and add that cello and/or soft violin you mentioned, and lower the tempo abit.

Once again, thank you for your review.