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Well Done

I liked this alot. The only thing I would really change is that sudden break between 0:22-0:29. I say cut that part out and just keep up with "wahwahwah" backdrop you've got going at the beginning. I think it would mesh very well with the pickup at 0:32. The rest was awesome though. Aaah!! Zombies! FLEEEEE!!!! 5/5, 9/10

Reikyo responds:

very cool man- thanks for the insight - this is what ive been looking for - big help! much appreciated - ill go right ahead and fix it up-

Pretty Good!

You weren't kidding when you said this track jumps around! It was like you had 4 different songs taking a turn here, lol. But there were some parts I really liked: 0:50-1:36, then 2:08-2:50 and 3:08-3:40 when you went back to the main beat. The other parts of the song weren't bad at all in my opinion, but they just didn't all fit together in a single track. 4/5, 8/10

Reikyo responds:

haha - yeah i did jump ALOT but thats just what i felt about the abyss- so much rolled into one- as long as you liked what you heard even though it didnt mesh so well together!

thanks for the feed back-

Amazing

Words fail me. The rise at 3:00 was just too good. I feel honored to have had advice from someone who could make this piece. This was awesome, thank you.

ObsidianSnow responds:

Thank you, lanky21. You're not bad yourself. ;)
Btw, if you ever want me to review something of yours in the future, give me a shout.

It Worked

I do feel happier now. I liked this little piece a lot. Cheers!

Gravijar responds:

Haha, thanks a lot man.

Awesome

Really loved the beat on this one. Each time it came up, it went perfectly with the rest of the sounds going on. Also, those strings were epic. You my friend, have been Fav'd by me. Woo! (throws confetti)

Gravijar responds:

Yay! Thanks dude.

Bam!

Instant review back! How you like that sucka?! Anyways, I wasn't too big a fan of the original, and I think this version surpasses it completely. Actually, more like jumps it in a dark alley and beats it within an inch of life and leaves it quivering in fear. ..Yeah, I have issues. 5/5

NightWake responds:

HAHAHAHA
Nice
Soulja boy wouldn't know what hit him

Oh No!!

Where's my face!! It's been melted off by ROCK!! Lol, love your guitar man, you are very talented.

ConnieB responds:

thanks man, same as desperado, but this time i set a drum beat with my keyboard loop and then bs'd through my instruments until it sounded good haha, thanks again

Amazing.

A definite 5. I'm downloading this as a reference on how a guitar piece should sound for future works of mine. There's no part of this that I didn't like or that I thought didn't fit. But in an effort to be useful, I'll nitpick and say that around 3:16 I would've preferred to keep the same slow pace rather than the quick buildup and then fast fade to the end of the song. But that's really more of a personal preference I think. Great job on this.

ConnieB responds:

wow thanks, noones ever like my songs that much ha, the reason it does that around 3:16 is because i dont pay attention to what im doing while i play, i just zone out and play what i feel...i have like ADHD or something so i just go on random spurts some times like that :P thanks again :D

EDIT: also, i didnt have a metronome so i started tapping my foot faster and lost track of what was going on and just BS'd it :P

Good

The first minute of the song reminds of that one movie where a bunch of crazy hunters like to trick people in the woods and then hunt them for sport. The name escapes me....Anywho, good track. The accidental addition of that other track almost fits in with the rest of the song, lol. 4/5 stars

aloneagainfriend responds:

yeah, thats why i never cut it out ;) ty man

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